A timed Paper 1 practice essay I did that scored 16/20. Please reach out to me if there is any illegible words, and I will try to edit to make it more readable. Areas with big ticks are considered good points that are worth evaluating.
Notes: As stated in the comments, I think a further elucidation on the role of the speaker relating to the theme of narrated family history could have been emphasized more in this essay in order to get a higher mark.
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- Language: English
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